[fic] Seven Times of You and Me III
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moon_catcherTitle: Seven Times of You and Me III
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gina84
Pairing: Akame
Disclaimer: In my dreams I can own anything… otherwise they belong to each other
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Eh, summary…I don’t think there can be one. It’s just seven words, seven sentences and seven short moments… again ^_^;;; because someone liked it O.o
A/N: For my sweet Blossom-chan karilly because I want to pamper her <33 and she wants to be pampered XDD
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Struggle
“Your English is getting better,” Jin makes an approving compliment but all he gets back from Kame is a sharp glance and a bitter remark: “While your Japanese is getting worse.”
Sunset
Jin is standing on a balcony smoking, a thin reek soars against the darkening blueness and scarlet of sunset, and Kame leaning against the rail next to him sighs in fascination --- “Isn’t it just beautiful?” --- not that he needs an answer for his question (more a statement) and Jin’s words are not one, because the older one has his eyes on Kame when he says a simple: “It is.”
Ring
Kame wears a ring on his middle finger because he likes skulls --- Kame wears a ring on his pinky because he loves Jin.
Lullaby
All the intercontinental calls cost him a fortune but Jin doesn’t care, night after night dialing the same number because he can’t fall asleep without hearing Kame’s voice.
Addiction
Jin pulls away from a kiss and with a smile on his lips says he has to go, but Kame waits in the door --- first Jin reaches the end of the hallway before coming back for another kiss, second time gets back from the lobby, then even from the street, and Kame knows Jin will be back one more time before finally leaving for work and keeps waiting.
Goodbye
“You should say it now, no need to prolong the agony,” Kame says after a moment of silence, his voice calm but his eyes flicking anywhere but Jin --- instead of words he gets a tight hug and a kiss: Jin’s way how to assure Kame the word will never leave his mouth.
Forever
In the middle of the night feeling Jin’s warm breathe against the sensitive skin of his nape and a hand possessively holding him in an embrace, Kame remembers the only time Jin lied to him --- “We will be friends forever, Kazu-chan,” he said --- the truth is they are so much more than that.
~ THE END ~
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~ SPOT ~
Date: 2010-12-23 03:06 pm (UTC)<3
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Date: 2010-12-23 07:02 pm (UTC)and can I say that I'm glad you select the word lullaby? 'cause it was the first one that crossed my mind when I asked you if I could give you words too and I was really curious about what you would come up with :DI laughed at the first one! Well, Jin's japanese was already bad to begin with ne~! The sunset one was just the cutest thing ever I'm telling you! I can totally envision this scene and awww of course Kame~chan is as
if not morebeautiful than a sunset! And and and the ring one!!!! It might be the shortest but it doesn't lessen its impact! I just love how you put it with the comparison with the skull and that was just uberly ♥Now when I thought that Ring was my favorite, I read the others and now I don't know anymore *pouts* The lullaby one is a win!! Kazuya's voice being Jin's lullaby just feel so right *grin* But I'm also loving the addiction one as much! Jin being addictive to Kazuya's kiss and well to Kazuya simply and coming back again and again and that was just so sweet and my heart melt!!! Goodbye was sweet too...well Jin was...just the way he reassured Kame~chan and also not wanting to say the word! Actually I was afraid that with stuggle and goodbye it might have turned a little angsty but you totally managed to make them fluffly and I love you for that <3
And then, the last but not least, forever *sigh* How could Jin even utter such a lie, I wonder? Because there's no way that they could be only friends...well, at least the forever is true ne~! Awwwww...just awesome!!! ♥
You're already at your third time for this series but I'm still amazed by your ability of writing those sentences. I was really looking forward to what you would come up with these words and what different emotions you would convey and it's way better than what I could have even imagine. I just love them so much as well as you and thank you so much Gina~chan ♥
sorry, I wrote to much again :pRe: ~ SPOT ~
Date: 2010-12-24 09:17 am (UTC)I told you I love pampering you, Blossom-chan!! <33
And the Lullaby was the first one I wrote - because I can't sleep without listening to Kame's singing... I have his songs on my "sweet dreams" playlist and it has become impossible to fall asleep without them :) That's why it was easy to write about lullaby!
And and and the ring *___* Every time I'm so melting at
the rumorthe fact Jin and Kame bought their pinkies back during the trip to Okinawa....Yup, Struggle and Goodbye sounded a bit angsty and my first thought was "eh? does she really want me to write angst?" ut I think it's better this way, a bit bitter but deep down under the meaning of the words there is still the love they feel, ne?
lol third time or not, believe me I'm still surprised as much as I was in the beginning :)
And you know I don't mind you writing so much!!! Not at all!! <33
even if your comments are almost longer than the drabble itselfXDLove you!
and once again Merry Christmas, ne? *hugs*
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Date: 2010-12-23 03:43 pm (UTC)^_^
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Date: 2010-12-23 03:54 pm (UTC)I loved Adicction... I can totally picure Jin coming back over and over again to feed his addiction for Kame's kisses and lips and... Well, his addiction for Kame, actually... ^_^
And Forever *sighs* It's jus so freaking awesome how Jin only lied about that, 'cause they never could be just friends... No back then and definitely not now &hearts
And Lullaby and Ring were so short but they made a smile appeared in my face ^_^ Kame and Jin are so cute, ne~~
All in all they were absolutely &hearts Way to pamper my sweet Blossom-chan ^_^ *hugs*
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Date: 2010-12-23 05:04 pm (UTC)I saw the scene with Jin keeping coming back to Kame for more kisses as if it was happening right in front of me *wishful thinking* so yeah, I CAN imagine Jin like that!
And the Ring one... omg, I really didn't know first what to do when Kari-chan gave me that word O.o Actually I'm a bit curious about what the girls were thinking about while picking the words.. because they surely had some ideas about what they would like to read, and then here I am giving them these mini-drabbles XDD which can be far away from their ideas...
If there is someone who deserves being pampered than it's Blossom-chan, ne? <3
and of course you, too, so you can choose your words as well if you want^.~no subject
Date: 2010-12-24 02:52 pm (UTC)Yes, I saw it so clearly too and I was gigling like an idiot the whole time.... I sooooooo want them to be somehow like that ^_^
That should be good.... Maybe they could try and doing it themselves with the same words, as it to show you what they imagined first....
I know...!! I want to pamper her soooooo bad as well &hearts
OMG~~ you're not kidding me, right? 'Cause I can TOTALLY give you a couple of dozen of words to have my own set of akame moments >.<no subject
Date: 2010-12-24 03:27 pm (UTC)TEN WORDS and try not to think much about them, the random ones are the bestAnd that's *points at the scratched text above* my Christmas for you, dear!! <33
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Date: 2010-12-24 05:02 pm (UTC)*LAUGHS HARD*Easy... These are my ten random words...
*Towel
*Plane
*Angel
*Beer
*Coat
*Zoo
*Mirror
*Reunion
*Hands
*Ecchi xDD
There... Have fun.... and Merry Christmas...!!! &hearts
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Date: 2010-12-23 04:00 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-23 04:04 pm (UTC)The first one was pure GENIOUS! I seriously loved it, it makes me smile and feel better
damn flu and thanks grandma for shouting "HI CORAAAAAAAA!" just when I finalle fell asleep >.<I loved the one about the kiss ♥ It was so sweet! Actually they all were/are! I loved them all and I loved every single word of each one ♥
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Date: 2010-12-23 05:17 pm (UTC)I knew you would want me to write more XDD
*___* the first one genious?? the one with languages?? *hugs* I really wasn't sure if it makes sense... Most of the time there is actually more of what is not said in the sentence and the point lies underneath..
^^;; Grandmas can be so sweet sometimes O.o
hope you'll feel better soon!! <33
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Date: 2010-12-23 05:45 pm (UTC)More? *puppy eyes*
Yes, they can be. Especially when half of the times they come to your house they forgot to greet you but they do remember in occasions like this one :|no subject
Date: 2010-12-23 04:12 pm (UTC)My favourite one are: struggle, sunset, and lullaby. There were so sweet, and cute.
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Date: 2010-12-23 05:28 pm (UTC)it's probably the only way how I can write fluff >.< and still there are not so much fluffy moments every now and then...
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Date: 2010-12-23 04:33 pm (UTC)i'm stalking the rest of your fic now ;))
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Date: 2010-12-23 05:47 pm (UTC)hope you'll enjoy them...
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Date: 2010-12-23 05:07 pm (UTC)this is just so loved!!!!
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Date: 2010-12-23 05:27 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-23 05:08 pm (UTC)I love you more and more my dear...
Such a lovely fic before I go to sleep...
Nite Nite...
till we your next one-sentence...XOXO
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Date: 2010-12-23 05:26 pm (UTC)next drabble? I was kind of thinking of no more drabbles for a while ^^;; but we will see, ne? it's still fun writing them..no subject
Date: 2010-12-23 05:16 pm (UTC)Seriously, all of these Drabbles are now my favorites! I have read your post yesterday and I was amazed at how you wrote them; simple and straightforward but the emotions were there in those tiny paragraphs! They were all VERY beautiful! T_T and gahhhdddd! I really envy you! *sulks in a corner*
I know we aren't friends (but it'd be awesome if we are and could ^.~) but will it be too much if I request this kind of Drabble from you? >_>no subject
Date: 2010-12-23 07:42 pm (UTC)I don't think I'm able to write a drabble... it would be way too easy to pick one of those words and write an one-shot, but I'm never sure how to guess the right length of a drabble XD
Really? I think we could be... friends :) I checked your Profile
don't worry, I'm stalking only wintersdancer Cora-chan lol*gets bricked* and I just love you still think of KT as 6-member group because I'm exactly like that *__*and if you give me 10 words I'll see what could I do for you^.~no subject
Date: 2010-12-23 05:27 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-23 06:34 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-23 05:40 pm (UTC)thank you!!!and merry christmas too!!!^______^
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Date: 2010-12-23 06:38 pm (UTC)Happy you enjoyed reading!
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Date: 2010-12-23 06:38 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-23 07:05 pm (UTC)yes, it's the best...
i love it!!
short, lovely, adorable..
and i laugh at the first sentence..
i can imagine a pouting jin after hearing that words from kazu.. XD
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Date: 2010-12-23 07:49 pm (UTC)*dies*
thank you, dear!!
Well, I actually imagined the first one more serious, with Kame being hurt at some point because Jin's improving English means Jin really wants to be in America :(( but on the other hand, you are the reader and you can see there what you want, ne? :) And poutin Jin is the best image ever XDD
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Date: 2010-12-23 07:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-23 07:49 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-24 01:42 am (UTC)very heartwarming~ (now you made me want to request a drabble :P)
drabble is awesome as always. and just so you know, you are amazing and one of my favourite writer. hehe :))
thank u for this^^
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Date: 2010-12-24 09:04 am (UTC)never thought I could be someone's favorite writer^^;; I don't know what to say...no subject
Date: 2010-12-24 02:08 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-24 09:03 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-24 04:04 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-24 09:03 am (UTC)Really thank you!
I knid of think Jin would need a moment to get the point of Kame's remark/sarcasm XD
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Date: 2010-12-24 04:24 pm (UTC)I LOVE IT♥♥♥♥♥
*HUGS*
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Date: 2010-12-26 10:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-29 05:38 pm (UTC)>>> Jin: getting worse
Kame: getting better
LOL...
SUNSET
>>> I really love this kinds of situations. I agree with you Jin. Kame-chan is indeed beautiful.
RING
>>> Ohohohoho...Kame-chan is wearing many rinbgs to camouflage 'the truth'.
LULLABY
>>> That is sooo sweet. I guess, Jin's day won't be complete without a hint of Kame-chan in it, even if it's just his voice.
ADDICTION
>>> Addiction in kisses!!! Kame-chan's poor lips! hehehehe
GOODBYE
>>> Ohhh...I feel the angst. T_T
FOREVER
>>> They have been always more than friends. *grins*
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Date: 2010-12-29 07:13 pm (UTC)Lullaby is... well, I can't fall asleep without Kame's voice either, always listening to his solos in my headphones until I finally sleep... Jin is luckier, he can call him >.<
Ring: yes, he can try as he wants but we KNOW ^.~
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Date: 2010-12-29 08:05 pm (UTC)Well in my case, my day won't be complete without a hint of kat-tun in it so before i sleep, i will always listen one kat-tun song. *grins*
YUP2! No matter how many times Kame covers it, we fans will always know!
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Date: 2010-12-29 06:49 pm (UTC)But as always I love all of them. I like how you always portray their relationship. That deep bond that doesn't need much words and the tenderness between them that shows in small things like jinjin holding him while sleeping or calling him just to hear him talk...
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Date: 2010-12-29 07:24 pm (UTC)*___* so love you for this because with that you put into words what I think about every time writing these "drabbles"... Who needs big gestures when love can be shown in something as simple as an evening call or one look?
And the colors of sunset with a light cigarette smoke against the sky is an image I can't get out of my head already for a while, don't know why... and here it fits perfectly I think, ne? But of course I'm sure I would forget about sunset the moment I saw Kame *___* <33
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Date: 2010-12-31 12:10 am (UTC)'Ring' 'Lullaby' and 'Addiction' are just <3<3<3
*hugs*
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Date: 2011-04-21 08:33 pm (UTC)*HUG*