[fic] Seven Times of You and Me
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moon_catcherTitle: Seven Times of You and Me
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gina84
Pairing: Akame
Disclaimer: In my dreams I can own anything… otherwise they belong to each other
Rating: PG
Summary: Eh, summary…I don’t think there can be one. It’s just seven words, seven sentences and seven short moments…
A/N: For shirayuki1582. Just a little something to cheer you up…. Hope you will like it, sweety! <33
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Night
Under the starlight sky of Okinawa, listening to the steady soothing sounds of a murmuring sea from within a small tent, a boy finds courage to change everything he has known and listens to his young confused yet stout heart: he fidgets in his sleeping bag shifting closer to his friend who is lying next to him and takes his hand into his own, slightly squeezing it --- his heart suddenly louder than the whispers of the waves outside.
Book
Reading a book Kame discreetly looks up watching Jin over the edge of the pages, not interested in the story anymore: the older one is teasing and bullying Nakamaru, chuckling and snickering as a five-year-old as always, and Nakamaru lets him, because it’s Jin, it’s a part of his charm and Kame himself knows that all too well.
Cat
Jin hears loud barking then something small and black and furry rushes forth from the nearest hedge being followed by a well-known form of Ran-chan clumsily chasing it running on her short legs --- Pin leashed on a dog-lead joyfully squeals --- and when Jin glances up his eyes meet Kame’s worried and sullen look which is immediately turned into a happy one, though; he wasn't expecting to see Jin today and meeting him all of sudden brings joy into his gloomy mood.
Plushie
Helping Kame with packing boxes, because Kame is finally moving out of his parents’ house soon, Jin finds an old and mangy plushie at the bottom of the wardrobe and with a spiky remark wants to throw it away --- but Kame springs to him across the room and snatches the plush monkey embracing it and snuggling to it, and Jin doesn’t get it at all until Kame reminds him it was no one else but Jin who bought the plushie a long time ago giving it to Kame for his first birthday since they knew each other.
Friend
“I think I don’t want to be just a friend anymore,” Jin suddenly says surprising Kame; a moment later the pink lips curl up into a shy smile though --- Kame doesn’t want it either.
Rain
Through the window fronting the street Kame sees Jin, the strings of heavy rain soaking his dark thick locks as the boy is not trying to protect himself from the storm anyhow, carefully holding a guitar case instead, and with a knowing smile Kame goes to the kitchen to prepare a tea, Jin will need something warm when he arrives.
Kame
Suddenly being woken up by a flustering feeling Jin darts up sitting on a bed and blinking in a sleepy confusion: he needs a moment to realize he is in a dark hotel room in LA, on the other side of the world and alone because he hasn’t found a way how to be in two places at once --- his body is chasing his dream having a tour in America while his heart…his heart is remaining back in Japan already having found its home…
~ THE END ~
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Date: 2010-12-21 11:34 am (UTC)because comment #1 is better than #35??lolRe: ~ SPOT ~
Date: 2010-12-23 12:07 am (UTC)The style is so subtle and there's images and moments and atmosphere and you know how much I like that!
My most favourites are "night" and "plushie". I love to imagine chibi kame in a tent under the starry sky and then the somewhat shy but gentle gesture... <3
And the plushie Jin gave him and Kame snuggles it! So adorable! <3 But I love all seven moments!
And honestly I don't think the last one is angsty. Jin might be far away but he has a home and someone, he can always go back to and this way he never feels lost or lonely. That's wonderful, right?
Thank you so much sweety! It really made me smile! :)
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Date: 2010-12-23 12:23 am (UTC)Gina ureshii!!! My mission was accomplished!! XD
I kind of thought about you and your way of seeing the world through images and tried to give something like that, the images put into words, into one sentence for each of them. And the random words you gave me were just perfect, somehow inspiring, you know?
It was like I read "night" and immediately thought about the tent on the Okinawa beach with chibi Akame inside, all unsure and somehow cute in a very clumsy way lol
Writing this drabble was fun, really, and it was for you <33´
I'm sending good night kiss to chibi Akame and wish chibi Jin to have a great first night at his new home!!!
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Date: 2010-12-21 12:06 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-21 12:32 pm (UTC)thanks dear, I'm happy you could see there all the emotions.... this idea of "only one sentence for each word" was a little hell for me XDD you know how much I love writing
a lotand suddenly everything had to squeeze in into a few words O.ono subject
Date: 2010-12-21 12:11 pm (UTC)How come it start so fluff and end in angst...
Naughty Gina~~~ But you know what, I was expecting it...:)
As always, its beautifully written...It's short but it captured all the essence perfectly...making me smile and pout at the different circumstances...
Now I need some fluff... *sigh*
*run along to look for some*
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Date: 2010-12-21 12:20 pm (UTC)No one said Jin won't come back to Japan! See the title of the last moment? It's all about Kame, no matter where Jin is a part of him, the most important part of him actually, is still with Kame :)
Anyway, I'll try to give you more "pure" fluff someday, ne? lol
or I'll tryno subject
Date: 2010-12-21 12:25 pm (UTC)But I guess the idea of him waking up in the middle of the night and realizing he's all alone kinda sad...I want Kame next to him on the bed where he can tugged him closer and snuggle his way to dream land...LOL
Gomene, I'm having my monthly my-hormone-is-not-cooperating day today...hahah
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Date: 2010-12-21 12:50 pm (UTC)and don't worry, they will wake up together next time :) since I found writing this really fun. I might consider writing another bunch of these one-sentence moments actually...
hope you will find the right fluff for today somewhere!
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Date: 2010-12-21 12:54 pm (UTC)Ohhh I like the 'Friend' moment... Fluff enough for me to wander with my own thought...
Enough for me to work on my Ninokame...hahaha
I guess I will never be out of muse as long as Kame is with me...
Ohhhh...cant wait for your next one-sentence then coz this is so powerful...The emotion really overwhelming even with such a simple sentences... But it's not a surprise coming from you of course... COZ YOU are SIMPLY AWESOME...
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Date: 2010-12-21 01:09 pm (UTC)yeah, Kame is our muse, ne? It's always enough just to look at him and I know what to write....
no wonder I usually end up writing making out scenes*shot**blushes* so much praising... I don't deserve that ^^; but of course thank you.
do you want to pick the prompt words for next sentences, then?
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Date: 2010-12-21 01:15 pm (UTC)This is totally random words but I'm have no doubt you'll do great...
1. Driving
2. Photo
3. Tomato
4. Necklace
5. Rumors
6. Tears
7. Kiss
8. Phonecall
9. Holiday
10. Together
Oppsss...sorry I got excited and carried away....But of course you dont have to use any of this if it doesn't suit your theme...:)
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Date: 2010-12-21 12:22 pm (UTC)So many fluffy and cute moments, captured in seven easy words... ^_^
Wow, Gina-chan!! I don't even know why I'm so suprised to see such a sweet update, coming from my al tme Miracle Girl ^_^
But I loved it &hearts All of them....
*hugs*
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Date: 2010-12-21 12:45 pm (UTC)lol you can't imagine how hard it was for me to keep everything always only in one sentence and not make it into a drabble
or one-shot in my caseconsidering my obsession in abusing words XDDno subject
Date: 2010-12-21 12:48 pm (UTC)Believe me, I can totally imagine it... That's why Ikept think "Wow, that's absolutely awesome, but I have not desire whatsoever to try that out"... Writng a drabble is already hell for me, thank you very much!! u_u
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Date: 2010-12-21 01:26 pm (UTC)I loved them all, especially the one about the rain and the one about the plushie ♥
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Date: 2010-12-21 02:59 pm (UTC)lol I had to hold myself back and not write a drabble out of each of the ideas XDD
yay, I like the plushie one a lot, too
because I was thinking about MY old plushie writing thatno subject
Date: 2010-12-21 01:49 pm (UTC)Good job!
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Date: 2010-12-21 02:56 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-21 02:27 pm (UTC)i'm a bit depressed at the moment (more to homesick actually) but thank you very much for this^^
beautifully written as always~
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Date: 2010-12-21 02:56 pm (UTC)I should have written it more fluffy >.< People apparently need a lot of fluff these days.... but I'm happy you liked it anyway, really.
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Date: 2010-12-21 03:57 pm (UTC)sorry for being whiny but your fic is more than enough. it cheers me up. so thank you very much~ hehe :))
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Date: 2010-12-21 03:45 pm (UTC)Jin bullying Maru can only be more interesting than any book! It's just the way things should be lol I also liked how Kame~chan's mood brightened only because he saw Jin :D And the friend one...awwwwww! Of course, wherever Jin is, his heart will always remain where Kame~chan is since the younger hold his heart :p
I was wondering how you do this! Giving lot of emotions in only a sentence and related to one word?! And then I remember that well, it's you so I'm not that surprise ^^ As always, Gina~chan is great *grin*
I've actually seen fazlyn~chan comment and I couldn't help but think of words too so if you ever think of doing a third round poke me, poke me :pno subject
Date: 2010-12-21 09:20 pm (UTC)if you want you can, because I want to welcome you properly, pampering you a little XDDno subject
Date: 2010-12-22 12:23 am (UTC)And because me can be a bad girl who wants to be pampered :p here:
because 8 is my lucky number, I'll chose 8 :p1. addiction
2. goodbye
3. lullaby
4. ring
5. scarf
6. sunset
7. struggle
8. forever
Just use the ones you want/are inspired with! And take your time okay! ♥
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Date: 2010-12-21 04:28 pm (UTC)Very well done, dear! ♥ ♥ ♥
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Date: 2010-12-21 09:21 pm (UTC)it was a little experiment for me, so I'm happy it came out well ^_^
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Date: 2010-12-21 08:53 pm (UTC)7 words, 7 phrases, but the feeling they give... <3
Thanks for sharing honey! <3
*hug*
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Date: 2010-12-21 09:32 pm (UTC)yay! that means I can say something meaningful in less than a ten pages long story?? *shot*
omg that's unbelievable XDD
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Date: 2010-12-21 10:08 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-21 10:08 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-22 10:31 am (UTC)thanks for sharing~~~
(^____________^)
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Date: 2010-12-22 05:14 pm (UTC)i love this one...
so apt...
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Date: 2010-12-23 07:09 pm (UTC)sorry..
but gina-chan......like what i told you before, it's awesome..
makes me bow deeply.. -you know the reason why-
you're rocks!! XD
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Date: 2010-12-23 11:06 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-24 06:22 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-26 05:32 am (UTC)Although they were short, each moment felt special to the both of them!
…his heart is remaining back in Japan already having found its home…
I LOVE THIS LINE
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Date: 2010-12-26 12:53 pm (UTC)the most special moment can be the shortest ones, ne? who needs to remember the whole story when the most important thing happens in one minute, or even second sometimes? :)
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Date: 2010-12-31 12:00 am (UTC)*hugs*
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Date: 2010-12-31 09:23 am (UTC)thank you.. I don't know what to say... really thank you, your words make me smile
and blush ^_^;;;*hugs*