[fic] Seven Times of You and Me IV
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moon_catcherTitle: Seven Times of You and Me IV
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gina84
Pairing: Akame
Disclaimer: In my dreams I can own anything… otherwise they belong to each other
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Eh, summary…I don’t think there can be one. It’s just seven words, seven sentences and seven short moments… you already know how it works, ne?
A/N: For my lovely Bubbles-chan norilys, my quick late Christmas present written while watching a fairy tale on tv…
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Ecchi
During his performance Kame steps closer to one of the Juniors seductively rolling his hips against the boy’s butt; for the latest photo shots Kame stares directly into the camera, his eyes half-lidded and the tip of the tongue sensuously licking the slightly parted lips; standing on the stage Kame loosens one more button than was scripted exposing his smooth skin and tinny nipples just because he is aware of the show is being recorded --- and when his phone starts ringing (Jin’s name on the display) Kame knows his plan was successful.
Angel
“Look, Jin, we really need… we have to talk,” Kame says in a serious voice then exhales a hot breath into his chilled palms and keeps walking, but stops only a few steps later not having the other one by his side anymore --- with a childish amusement Jin is lying on the ground swinging his hands up and down flattening the snow around him: “Look, Kazu, an angel!”
Towel
The towel Kame wrapped around his hips after taking a bath lays somewhere along the way from the bathroom to the bedroom followed by a t-shirt and baggy jeans --- Kame’s muffled voice resonates with Jin’s behind the closed door.
Mirror
Jin doesn’t like the whole fuss before a concert starts (sitting in a dressing room for what seems to be hours sometimes getting the make-up and hair and costumes done) with one exception: the moment when his eyes in a mirror meet Kame’s in another one across the room.
Plane
“I hate flying,” Jin states without ever having flown and Kame only rolls his eyes: he knows this won’t last for long, Jin’s dreams are too big for only one continent.
Hands
First time Jin plops down onto a couch next to Kame incidentally flapping his hand, second time it still doesn’t make much sense to both of them when Jin waits for Kame in front of the dressing room, joins him on the way home and their hands accidentally graze each other, but then third time Jin already wittingly takes Kame’s hand pretending he is interested in the new ring, fourth time Jin hesitates, though, suddenly afraid of Kame’s reaction (because he wants to take the warm and soft hand and hold it) --- Kame notices it and smiles: “It’s okay, Jin…”
Reunion
It took Ueda a while before he finally understood the reason why Kame no more is sad when Jin leaves to America for another concert tour, but he will never say a word, just watching from aside how Kame’s mood brightens up every time Jin comes back.
~ THE END ~
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~ SPOT ~
Date: 2010-12-25 12:15 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-25 12:24 am (UTC)My fav will be mirror...It's simple and yet imaginable. Ir's like a guy hated waiting for the girl taking hours to get ready...But then when he saw the reflection, everything worth it... Its KAzu...of course its worth it....:)
And Hands...that is so cute...I can imagine it bloom into whole one-shot though...*wink*
With so many great fic in Christmas morning (yes its morning here), I think I better join the jolly season as well...
*off to write a fluff Christmas*
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Date: 2010-12-25 12:36 am (UTC)Well, here it's 1:30am >.< (yeah, I'm about to go to bed)
The Mirror is really simple, and I can imagine it so well, with all the other people in the room, everyone is nervous about the upcoming concert, and Jin and Kame sit there each of them looking into a mirror in front of them and then their eyes meet in the reflection and nothing else matters for the little moment *melts*
anyway, I'm getting ready for my midterm tests >.< so I won't have much time for lj or writing akame *sighs* T_T but after that I'm actually kind of planning on expanding some of those sentences into drabbles or one-shots (because I'm helpless and always think up so much more than can be written in only one sentence ^^;;)
YES PLEASE!!! Give
meus a nice Christmas Akame FLUFF!!! *___**can't wait*
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Date: 2010-12-25 04:43 am (UTC)thanks for sharing~~~ ♥
Merry Christmas! ♥
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Date: 2010-12-25 05:49 am (UTC)and i'm addicted to read it..
lovely as ever..
wanna more?? pwe-ase?? *puppy eyes*
thank you for this amazing sentences, ne.. XDD
and happy holiday, gina-dear.. :*
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Date: 2010-12-25 05:58 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-25 07:09 am (UTC)it's just simply love >_<
thanx 4 sharing.. happy holiday!!!
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Date: 2010-12-25 07:58 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-25 09:23 am (UTC)omg <33 you have Kazuko-chan icon!! ♥♥♥
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Date: 2010-12-25 09:24 am (UTC)and thank you, I'm happy you like it!!
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Date: 2010-12-25 09:26 am (UTC)Just people keep asking me to write them >.< See? see? like you do XDD
But I really should stop and write something with more than one sentence! I CAN write something with more sentences ^_^;;
Happy holiday, Dy-chan sis!!
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Date: 2010-12-25 09:27 am (UTC)thanks for reading ♥
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Date: 2010-12-25 10:14 am (UTC)it's awesome. see.. a-we-so-me.. XD
i wonder, what about writing your specialty -that is NC17 *grin*- in this kind of drabble..
don't worry, ne, i'll read whatever from you -no, not whatever..akame-ever i mean..- so don't worry, less or more sentences definitely will work..
yay, wish you great holiday, gina-dear.. <33
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Date: 2010-12-25 12:44 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-25 01:55 pm (UTC)Re: ~ SPOT ~
Date: 2010-12-25 03:20 pm (UTC)And I must say you did a better job than Santa!Yoko*puffs her cheeks*I was drooling all over the place with Ecchi... OMG~~ I've always been aware of how handsome, cute and sexy Kame is... But somehow Plastic Tears took the whole thing to another level... That guy was.... *_______* And I still hyperventilate when I stare at his performance on SC....
Hands and Angel were soooooooooooooooooooo damn cute....!! Jin is such an adorable criature, seriously... I just loved to see how you portrayed him there ^_^
And somehow Towel, Reunion and Mirror gave me the same feeling... And I loved them all. They were fluffy but in a realisic and sweet way... And even Plane somehow felt a little tiny bit angsty, I loved it as well, 'cause Kame understands....
I loved my early Xmas Present ^_^ Sorry it took me so long to comment on it :S But I really did loved them all
even when you missed 3 of my words*winks*Re: ~ SPOT ~
Date: 2010-12-25 03:50 pm (UTC)I really hope Yoko is better hubby than santa *pouts**gets bricked*
For me Kame's hotness has been already taken to another level while I was watching Dream Boys *____* and yeah, Plastic Tears killed me again <33
lol the childish and super cute Jin... I think there is no way not to love him being like that and I really enjoy writing about him being sweet and adorable and baka XDD I hope we will never grow up and that there will always be at least moments when we could see the playful sparkles in his eyes <33
Somehow there can't be only fluffy in my stories *hides* don't ask me why, I don't know >.< But here it's not angst either, as you said yourself, it's just real, ne? We are not living in a perfect world, and Jin goes to America - but he also comes back and that's a big reason not to be sad :)
It's okay, I didn't want to push you, I was just a little worried you could miss it *pouts* And I didn't miss three of your words, I just didn't pick them. See the title? It's SEVEN moments *sticks her tongue*
I asked you for ten to have a possibility to choose which I wanted to writeXDDEh? It was early Christmas for you?? lol okay, time zones rock, ne? XDD
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Date: 2010-12-25 05:32 pm (UTC)As usual, they're all great....I loved a particular sentence: ♥
And "Hands" was so awwwwww ♥
sorry for the comment without sense, I'm still trying to survive to the Christmas's lunch :|no subject
Date: 2010-12-25 10:22 pm (UTC)It's wonderful ... great ... awesome ...
Angel and Hands and all the others.
Thank you)))) ^^
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Date: 2010-12-26 08:00 am (UTC)it gives gentle simple feel to akame relationship
thank u dear
merry Xmas
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Date: 2010-12-26 09:23 am (UTC)sweet sweet sweet~
fluffy fluffy~
lovely lovely lovely~
sorry cant give u proper comment *shot gain*
love it so so much..thank you for make my day^^
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Date: 2010-12-26 12:38 pm (UTC)you know I love your sensless commentslolhey, how do you do that? I think I asked before but... you really always pick the line or the moment in my fics I love the most <33 ike here the one with Jin's dreams.... even if everything else in here was a lie this one, I think, is not so far away from the truth :) Japan is too small for him XD
Hope you survived!!
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Date: 2010-12-26 12:41 pm (UTC)oh, I checked your page and though my knowledge of Russian is very limited I think you did a great job translating the drabbles!! and your readers really seem they like it and that makes me very very happy! so it's my turn to say thank you, ne? ^.~
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Date: 2010-12-26 12:42 pm (UTC)thank you for your words! <3
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Date: 2010-12-26 12:43 pm (UTC)thanks for reading~
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Date: 2010-12-26 12:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-26 12:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-26 12:46 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-26 12:48 pm (UTC)because that's how it is*gets bricked*enjoy the holiday, too, dear!!
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Date: 2010-12-26 12:58 pm (UTC)I don't know how I do, but it's probably because of you. I mean, it's you the one who writes great things and it's only natural to choose some lines ♥
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Date: 2010-12-26 08:27 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-27 02:03 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-27 03:59 am (UTC)You should definitely write more of these. You could post a questions when people could give you suggestions (the words to start from) ^^
Anyway, I really enjoyed reading them. Thanks for sharing and waiting for more. XDXD
*hugs*
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Date: 2010-12-27 09:04 am (UTC)lol Ecchi is... eh, my way how to drool over Kame in one sentence XDD *shot*
first I just wanted to write something short and quick for a friend - and since I'm hopeless with drabbles ^^;; (once there is a story line I'm not able to make it short lol) this way seemed to be quite good... I've never expected to write more than the first one! :)
that's why no prompt post right now.. maybe later but right now I want to keep it as it is, as sort of gifts for my friends
who are insolent enough to ask for them XDDno subject
Date: 2010-12-27 02:59 pm (UTC)I can perfectly understand you with the drabbles, since it's hell for me to write them too. Hehe.
You actually did a great job and I really think you should continue. XD (I don't want to pressure you, though)
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Date: 2010-12-28 04:55 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-12-29 06:34 pm (UTC)>>> Ohohohohohoho...mischievous!kame-chan is really the best!!!
ANGEL
>>> hahahaha...Jin is being adorable...
TOWEL
>>> *blush*
MIRROR
>>> oh~ i wanna witness those glances!
PLANE
>>> Jin's dreams are really big!
HANDS
>>> Jinjin is being shy. Ya know Jin, you just have to ask. Turtle-chan will gladly allow you.
REUNION
>>> Jin will always come back for his Kazu-chan.
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Date: 2010-12-29 07:43 pm (UTC)Plane: I just hope he won't have to wake up soon >.<
Ecchi...... lol... of course he is XDD he knows how to get (not only) Jin's attention, ne?
and eh... Towel... well, you probably shouldn't read the next one I'm going to post in a few minutes because if this made you blush then I can't imagine what could happen after reading next seven moments ^_^;;;;
Angel: I can sooo imagine this happening... Kame all serious wants to talk about something - and Jin being all childish.... but it's impossible to be mad at him, ne? *__*
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Date: 2010-12-29 08:08 pm (UTC)Plane: hahaha...
Ecchi: Kame-chan is like a strategist...XD
Towel: AKAME love making is just toooo HOT!!!
Angel: I so totally agree!
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Date: 2011-01-13 03:50 am (UTC)I'm sorry I'm so late reading this *bricks*As usual, I really loved those small drabbles and you did a great job with those ones as well!
Kazuya is such a
slutteaser in Ecchi but it's sooo love! Well he really knows Jin's well so no wonder his plan worked ne~!And Jin's being childish but so cute in Angel <3 Poor Kazuya though, he surely didn't get his serious talk with Jin *giggles* But it's okay since he could witness Jin's adorable side~
Do I need to say that the Towel one is ♥!!! Telling so much in only a sentence! XD
I also really loved mirror. It really showed how those glances are important and cherished, like a treasure~ It's like there are only waiting to meet each other's eyes. Am I going to far? haha~
Even though Jin is leaving, Plane doesn't feel angsty just because it seemed that Kazuya support him and that's love~ And well I can totally imagine Kame~chan rolling his eyes at Jin *laugh*
Now hands is probably my favorite making me feel awwwwww. Jin is again such a cutie here! Very adorable. And I loved how you show the 'evolution' of their contant and Jin's attemps to take Kazuya's hands. And then I loved that it was Kazuya who finally said that it was okay <3
Reunion is such a nice way to finish this and I liked how you convey the feelings throughout Ueda's POV. Well, surely if the reunion is worth it, one can endure the separation more easily :p And in the end, Jin had a place when he can always come back~
Thank you for sharing Gina~chan! I'll read the other one I missed tomorrow since my bed is calling for me :p Thank you so much for sharing ♥
p/s: I hope your doing fine dear~ ♥
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Date: 2011-04-21 08:38 pm (UTC)But 'Angel' really put a smile on my face <3